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Alicia's avatar

So artfully subtle.

MoTy's avatar

Blue eyes, no name. Who’s chopping the wood Gan? Love my weekly dark room visits x

Gan's avatar

Just a man haunting a motel, you’re always welcome

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Your writing opens doors to other worlds. I felt entirely immersed in this. Wonderful!

Gan's avatar

You have a great name miss Nora

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Thanks so much!

Ronna Lapray's avatar

I know this place , only through your writing . But , it’s a place I’ve been mulling over in my mind for months - great writing - even better connection

Gan's avatar

It is haunting in every sense

Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

This is highly atmospheric and somewhat unsettling. Great job!

Gan's avatar

thank you

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was superb. Nicely written and creates an atmosphere in which you really feel immersed, even just a short way in. Great stuff.

Gan's avatar

good to have you

Thomas Greenbank's avatar

Very well written and atmospheric. Loved it.

Gan's avatar

hope you make yourself at home, look in on the others