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Alicia's avatar

The way the truly horrifying elements are presented in such a clinical manner is brilliant. It dawns slowly what is actually going on. Awesome work!

Gan's avatar

Always a pleasure to hear from you Alicia

Ronna Lapray's avatar

I love the crazy amount of horror silently woven into this story- The matter of fact- ness makes it too real . I’m almost curious but I know better

Gan's avatar

Hope you are well Ms Lapray. thank you for sticking with me

Ronna Lapray's avatar

Of course and I’m ok I told you , I’m always ok,

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Perhaps the most chilling story yet. The horror is hidden so well in the depths of bureaucracy that the owners and employees notice only a production change for the better.

Great work, Gan!

Gan's avatar

Once production goes up, perhaps nobody wants to ask what exactly has changed.

MoTy's avatar

This is yet another piece where you’ve mastered bureaucratic horror. The scene set upgrades. No scream, but the report. Progress would never be surrendered to local judgement x

Gan's avatar

atrocity becomes respectable once it has been properly documented

Sunshine's avatar

This piece is haunting and compelling. The mix of technical precision with the unsettling presence of living material creates a powerful tension throughout. Thank you for sharing this unique and thought-provoking work.

Gan's avatar

thanks for reading

Parker McCoy's avatar

I'm glad I don't work there. Hehe. I like the idea of Harold being more of a part of the machinery and inner workings than he is an actual human being. I think this can be compared to modern business for sure. Haha. Awesome story, Gan.

Gan's avatar

Harold may be the perfect employee