This is a powerful piece, Gan. I love the way you move between the quiet details of an ordinary morning and those larger reflections about the world we’re living in right now.
I’m not sure you meant it exactly this way, but there does seem to be something looming in the air lately, doesn’t there? Perhaps especially with recent events.
Though things haven’t been going particularly well as it is; as we're learning.
Still, maybe that energy isn’t wholly destructive. Maybe a little destruction is what we need. No more suffering would be nice, but I suppose we’ll soon see.
I love how you describe the clouds. They're simply adorable when they have those puffy golden edges- I love it when they float past slowly. This was a beautiful piece of writing- thanks for posting.
Epic stuff!
Man, this was really a great story...imagery, rhythm, mood...all there in synch, and moving it forward. Really nice, Gan; thanks for the read
I’m encouraged, thank you so much
Wow! The descriptiveness of the scene places the reader exactly where they need to be- what was deemed boring made interesting and relevant.
This is a powerful piece, Gan. I love the way you move between the quiet details of an ordinary morning and those larger reflections about the world we’re living in right now.
I’m not sure you meant it exactly this way, but there does seem to be something looming in the air lately, doesn’t there? Perhaps especially with recent events.
Though things haven’t been going particularly well as it is; as we're learning.
Still, maybe that energy isn’t wholly destructive. Maybe a little destruction is what we need. No more suffering would be nice, but I suppose we’ll soon see.
Beautiful work.
We are hearing and understanding each other
Gan - your way with imagery is unmistakable. Reading this, I felt dropped right into the scene. Lost in overcast orange, over here.
Gam you’re doing everything right. No need to discuss others here - it's not fair to the author. Sending good vibes.
i’m doing something right when someone with such talent enjoys
I love how you describe the clouds. They're simply adorable when they have those puffy golden edges- I love it when they float past slowly. This was a beautiful piece of writing- thanks for posting.
i love nature being adorable and eternal while we fret about little lives