This piece holds great pace. You sense the impending doom building. The patient accumulation of observation and the weight of small details really stay with you. Nice work, Gan.
Another smashing piece. The humorous notes poking through “floor smelled of paper, polished wood, and the institutional cleaner the county had used for as long as I could remember”. Bravo! x
This piece holds great pace. You sense the impending doom building. The patient accumulation of observation and the weight of small details really stay with you. Nice work, Gan.
"The woman who ran it never learned names but never forgot an order." ~ good line.
Another smashing piece. The humorous notes poking through “floor smelled of paper, polished wood, and the institutional cleaner the county had used for as long as I could remember”. Bravo! x
continuation, until it suddenly stops. then continues on again. good message for a cold courthouse!
continuation whether or not justice is served
There was a lot here that was so well done. These two sentences stood out as excellent:
Outside, a spring storm had lowered itself over the town with the patience of all things that have been a long time coming.
He was fluent in the language of reasonable men, and the language had always served him.
Thank you for pointing those out
Again your multifaceted writing is spot on - not your usual crazy ending , but , one that is perfect great job
this one seemed to require a straighter ending
You know exactly what all your stories need
Great story. I suspected the ending, as there was no other way to go, really.
we all know that bastard had it coming
Wow! I was not expecting the murder at the end. Great job!
glad to suprise you
Wonderfully done. That was a great read.
I appreciate that
That was an amazing read! You are a talented writer! 🥰
Thank you kindly
Powerful!!!
happy to have you!